tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14845100.post6614711014085191404..comments2023-03-25T03:56:42.144-05:00Comments on Wombat's Gaming Den of Iniquity: [Writing Tips] An Editing ExampleJim Whitehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10238994819794067525noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14845100.post-23192762111669443832013-05-30T20:56:27.349-05:002013-05-30T20:56:27.349-05:00Clarity: That's the idea.
Glad you like it. A...Clarity: That's the idea.<br /><br />Glad you like it. And thanks!Jim Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10238994819794067525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14845100.post-8726424390092692442013-05-30T11:20:29.214-05:002013-05-30T11:20:29.214-05:00LOVE this article! It's all about one thing: ...LOVE this article! It's all about one thing: clarity. Whenever I write, edit or even roleplay at our D&D or Dragon Age games, that's what I'm after. <br /><br />Great stuff Wombat, love the raw redline example, really drives the post home.Tonyhttp://www.leonineroar.com/noreply@blogger.com